"A little ebb, within a little hour, And then the voice of each, in that calm bower, And each to each could breathe sweet words anew, And talk of love as happy lovers do." And now for the turning point of the story, which is rendered thus: (We quote at length, as a fair specimen of the whole.) "I pass these raptures - for these raptures passed: Not without import on the stream it fell: The debt to vengeful Nemesis amassed Will have its hour-and she exacts it well: Though human hearts (let but the goddess wait) Are their own Nemesis, or soon or late. "Suns rose and set:- The Sire, the Dame, the Priest, "Returning from a revel- the most bright "Perchance some flash of light and reckless mirth "For at the moment when Pietra's glance Better had he who smiled, with pointless lance If he had stabbed her, even as she smiled! "Lo! the first taint of canker in the rose- "Sternly he sullened on their homeward way- "Stern was the bidding-stern the bidder's look: And with dread haste obeyed the bidding stern. "As down some dusky stream a dying swan Creeps slow, slow down the marble stairs she crept, From out the portal's gloomy arch-way stept: On his dark steed: another neighed before her, "Why spake he not? this dreadful silence why? 'O God!' the dark steeds sprang away — away!" This is but prelude to a mournful journal of the transfer to the tower in the middle of the fatal marsh of Maremma, and the slow wasting of the innocent and lovely victim under the insidious poison of malaria, and the stony silence of the preternatural, inhuman vengeance of the husband, who came every day to see her waste, "And, while the suppliant wept and prayed apart, Held him inexorably silent still: Raising her hot and streaming eyes anon, "Gone-and no word: and thus, all sternly dumb, Oh! list, poor victim! list the bittern's hum, List to whate'er drear voice comes o'er the fen- "Oh sternest gaoler that did ever yet Gaze upon martyred sweetness, vulture-eyed! — With his own hand, and trusted none beside:- Of the Maremma worked like poison there. "Chiefly on her: the oil of her sweet lamp With speedier ruin wasted: lip and cheek "Oh! then, the banquet of avenging ill The avenger saw and felt was spreading fast! And Retribution's fiery hand should fill Her 'cup of trembling' to the brim at last!— He saw her drooping-withering-sickening still, All this is very powerfully told, and there is not wanting a halo of high spiritual beauty about the portrait of the sufferer, to relieve the natural horrors of the sacrifice. The poet employs one little trick of euphony a great deal, and not without a musical effect. It is what would be called, in musical composition, the imitation of passages or phrases. That is, the echoing in the next line of a form of words from the line preceding, or from the first to the last half of the same line; and this sometimes in the direct, sometimes in the inverted or reflected order; which gives a unity and compactness to the stanza, rhythmically considered, like the continual repetition of the same little motive in a good piece of music. Perhaps he carries it too far for poetry. Here are in stances: "I pass these raptures · for these raptures passed: Oh! then the change!—and now the change I tell." "Their gloomy pathway gloomier shadows cast." "And from the bleak sky to the bleaker shore." And so repeatedly. Sometimes the imitation runs all through a stanza, as in the following, which is very graphic: "Thither she dragged-and saw the fenny grass And heard the bittern boon in the morass, This is like Spenser: "The wretched porter of those wretched stones, His breath was a mixed thing of gasps and moans, Blear-eyed he was, and vext with ache and cramp, We have not room to go into any critical invoice of the minor poems which fill out the volumes. They are of every variety, in form and subject, though mostly of the kind called "occasional poems." Among the best are the "Epithalamium," the "Lover's Rhapsody," (so à la Wordsworth,) and "Pale Student." Many are written for music, but they are not simple enough for that; the words should simply hint the theme, if music is to develop it. A tendency to too great copiousness of words is frequently apparent, as, for instance, in the version of Goethe's "Das Blumlein Wunderschön." The sonnets are beautifully moulded, and have the poetic tone; but there is not always meaning enough in them. He justifies the form by prefixing to two separate batches of them Wordsworth's two sonnets, one quoting authorities from Shakspeare to Milton, and the other likening the sonnet to "the prison, unto which we doom ourselves," and which, therefore, "no prison is." There is a disposition to support the right side in some humanitary questions, here and there, as in the condemnation of war in the "Stanzas on Waterloo." We are sorry, however, that the author should have deemed it necessary to add an apologetic note to prove his patriotic reverence for the "GREAT VICTOR," the Duke of Wellington! We will end with a specimen of one style of poem, in which our author is perhaps as successful as in any other. THE SHORTEST DAY. "Pile ye the faggot-heap Autumn is dead! Winter, the icicled, Reigns in his stead: Faster and faster Come, Ravage and Dearth! Winter, your master, Is lord of the earth! "Spread we the feast Bid the curtains be drawn Twilight hath ceased, And 't is long to the dawn Hark to the rising gust! Hark to the rain! Hark to the sleety shower Hurled on the pane! "Heap the hearth's splendour up Hail to the blaze! If we must render up Homage and praise Be thou our comforter, SHORTEST OF DAYS! "With a halo of glory, (As though 't were in scorn Thou yieldest a token "The team to the shed, And the flock to the pen - They know not the night-wave Is ebbing again; But joy, joy, to your pillows, LIGHT's glorious billows Are flowing again! "Dash the torch, and the taper, Through storm and through vapour Come, life-giving DAY! Joy's glance, with thy morrow, More joyous shall be, And the pale cheek of Sorrow Grow brighter for thee! |